oh no... OH NO, I feel the self-critique inside of me wanting out..!

Look, it's a little thing but since it's the punchline it's a little important I get it right, you know?

Might seem like a detail for some, but last panel with Richard looking at his breast, it would've have been more impactful, I think, if I had kept the same position he was in, in the third panel. The less the changes between angles and character positions, the more impactful the punchline can be, since we keep focused on the dialogue rather than character movement. 

I don't know how coherent these explanations are when I go on about panels and character positions and all, it'd be better with drawings to show you every time how I'd change things but I'm already busy enough as it is, sadly!

--> This is a rerun of the finished webcomic Go Get a Roomie! You can find these two strips in the old archive >here<!